The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a booksellere between 1972 and 2012
The given pie charts depict the
sales
of five types of books
(adult
and children's fiction
, biography
, travel, and others) by a bookseller percentage-wise from 1972 to 2012. Overall
, adult
fiction
contributed the biggest segment of sales
whereas
biography
become
the smallest Wrong verb form
became
at the end
of the period.
In 1972, adult
and children's fiction
, as well as
biography
books
, had the same amount of sales
which were recorded as 20%. However
, adult
fiction
experienced a significant increase in books
sold to almost half of the pie meanwhile children's fiction
books
had a slight rise of 5% throughout the period.
In contrast
, the sales
of biography
declined to 8%. Fix the agreement mistake
biographies
Moreover
, other kinds of books
also
decrease gently from 25% to 12% after 40 years. Even so, travel book sales
increased by 3% in the year 1992 but dropped to 10% at the end
of the year.
Hence
, this
ends the report.Submitted by farahhuzaimee on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, books, adult, fiction, biography with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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