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Art and music are considered some of the fundamental elements of all societies. Do you think art and music still have a place in today’s world of technology? Should children spend more time learning art and music at school?

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By the chart of poverty rates by sex and age in the United States in 2008, we can describe few things and make summarize about it. On the first rage we pearly can see, that poverty in group of
people
 under 5 years old, is nearly the same and reaches to a little higher 20 per
cent
. Than in diapason from 5 to 17 years old scale drops closer to 15 per
cent
. Next band shows us different already. From 18 to 24 years old more poor are
women
 and ranges to 20 per
cent
,
men
 to 15 per
cent
. Same character we can see in next band. In 25-34, there are indicators: 15 per
cent
 for
women
 and 10 per
cent
 for
men
.
Moreover
, the older
people
 get, the lower indicators are, saving their characters with a little different: 35-44 is 12 % for
women
, 7 % for
men
, 45-54 is 7 % for
women
 6 % for
men
, 55-59 is 8 % for
women
 6 % for
men
, 60-64 is 10 % for
women
, 8 % for
men
. And
at the end
 of
people
 life we can see the difference between the scores: in range from 65 to 74 is 10% for
women
 and 7 % for
men
, in to 75 and upper is 13 % for
women
 and 6 % for
men
. As we can see the older
people
 get, the richer they become, but
at the end
 of life much
people
 are losing their wealth.
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