PEOPLE ARE BECOMING MORE AND MORE OBESE. What are the reasons of this problem and how can this be solved?
Nowadays, junk
food
restaurants
are becoming really common because they are cheap,however
, they have led people
to gain weight as a result
, governments should impose taxes
on them.This
essay will analyse how people
are gaining weight and, how can they handle this
issue.
In the vast majority of ,cases fast-food
restaurants
are one of the main reasons for obesity. Firstly
, they provide food
that contains a lot of unhealthy oils,consequently
, people
have diseases such
as heart attack and, diabetes.Add to that they give cheap food
that everyone can buy it. Moreover
, people
feel ideal and, they do not walk or make sport, because they work really hard and feel tired so, they prefer to set down instead
of walking in their leisure time.
On the other hand
, there are many solutions to this
problem and, one of the effective ones is taxes
should be imposed by the government. For example
, fast food
restaurants
should pay high amounts of money for taxes
, therefore
, junk food
prices will increase sharply and, people
will prefer cooking at home. Secondly
, gyms should be put in workplaces as a result
, employees will make exercises in their free time and, that can help them to lose some weight and gain a healthy body.
In conclusion, I believe people
can have a healthy lifestyle if government enforce taxes
on junk food
restaurants
,however
, people
should start to change their own lifestyle to avoid obesity and diseases.Submitted by aljazihalfarhan on
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