PEOPLE ARE BECOMING MORE AND MORE OBESE. What are the reasons of this problem and how can this be solved?
Nowadays, junk
food
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restaurants
are becoming really common because they are cheap,Use synonyms
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people
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as a result
, governments should impose Linking Words
taxes
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issue.
In the vast majority of ,cases fast-Linking Words
food
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restaurants
are one of the main reasons for obesity. Use synonyms
Firstly
, they provide Linking Words
food
that contains a lot of unhealthy oils,Use synonyms
consequently
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people
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such
as heart attack and, diabetes.Add to that they give cheap Linking Words
food
that everyone can buy it. Use synonyms
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people
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instead
of walking in their leisure time.
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On the other hand
, there are many solutions to Linking Words
this
problem and, one of the effective ones is Linking Words
taxes
should be imposed by the government. Use synonyms
For example
, fast Linking Words
food
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restaurants
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taxes
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therefore
, junk Linking Words
food
prices will increase sharply and, Use synonyms
people
will prefer cooking at home. Use synonyms
Secondly
, gyms should be put in workplaces Linking Words
as a result
, employees will make exercises in their free time and, that can help them to lose some weight and gain a healthy body.
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people
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taxes
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food
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restaurants
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however
, Linking Words
people
should start to change their own lifestyle to avoid obesity and diseases.Use synonyms
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