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households owning and renting accommodation in england and wales 1918 to 2011

#households #accommodation #england #wales
The bar chart demonstrates to us, the percentage of people who rented and owned lived house in England and Wales over the period between 1918 to 2011. Households
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 increased gradually between 1918 and 1961. Respectively %23 in 1918, %37 in 1939, %32 in 1953 and %41 in 1961.
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household
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accommodation
 decreased dramatically from %77 in 1918 to %68 in 1939 and
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 1939 is
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 with %86 in 1953.
Rented
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household
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 went down to %59 in 1961. Both
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rented and owned
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 of %50 in 1971. Before 1971,
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a household
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household
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proportion slightly dropped from %40
to%31
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 until 2001
whereas
household
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 in owned of proportion rose steadily from %60
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%
69
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 until 2001. After that owned
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accommodation
 fall down from %69
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%
65
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 in 2011
on the contrary
 rented
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accommodation
 went up from %31
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