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It’s more important for school children to learn about their local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is often argued that learning at
school
 about local traditions should be preferred to lecturing about
world
history
.
Although
 I agree that educating
children
 to
study
 what occurred to
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human beings in general, I think that the
school
, as
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 entity, should devote more time to help
family
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into preserving
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 local customs and usages. On the one hand, it is important for
school
children
 to go through their customs and to have teachers with the proper willingness to play a significant role in keeping dialects and practices. That means, the educators, several times coming from other places, have the responsibility to be integrated into the surrounding area. What’s more,
children
 should have at
school
 the chance to
study
, at least, the main historical monuments of their city to be prepared, once they become
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, to give value to and take advantage of what their town offers to the visitors. From my perspective, I had foreign teachers, sometimes coming from other places
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 Italy that did not know anything about Ravenna, the city where I was born and raised.
On the other hand
, it is
also
 crucial for
school
children
 to
study
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world
history
 since it helps to look up their mindset, to appreciate other cultures and attitudes. Teachers dedicate time to explain what occurred to human beings from the birth of the first man, the primitive man to
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world
 war
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second. In my
opinion
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this
 approach helps or should help a lot to keep focused in mind
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 main mistakes made by people
along
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the
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history
 to avoid their repetition.
However
, what has been happening in Ukraine since February 2022 disappoints me and
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 that neither knowing the past events protect people to do again some sort of bad acts.
To conclude
, though I agree that it is basically important for
children
 to
study
world
history
 at
school
 to understand other cultures in general and some mistakes made in the past by human beings, I think that both keeping local traditions,
dialets
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dialects
dialect
, customs and giving
this
 kind of responsibility to the
school
 play an essential role in education.
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