In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.

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is a significant problem for all the

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who have difficulties eating in a healthy way. Some

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believe that governments should impose a higher tax to increase the prices of

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main point of view which I believe that it is one of the most effective ways to help. In some countries every day the number of obese

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is increasing, we do not talk only about adults, children with

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disease are a crucial problem too. These kids are often bullied at school and

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situation can even cause premature depression in a child who probably feels alone and without any friends. The United States is one of the countries around the world with the highest number of obese

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a lot of research

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conducted by American professional figures and University, which confirmed that a bad diet increases the probability of health problems

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obesity which

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both physical and psychological

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as ictus, heart attack, limit movements, the need of oxygen, loneliness and even, suicide thoughts. Some

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believe that governments must try to limit junk

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by imposing a higher cost on it. The prices

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fast

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are very low,

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at Mcdonald's or Burger King one hamburger costs only 1.5 euros (in Italy)

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prefer to buy a prepared meal,

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of cooking for themselves. I believe

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necessary

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solutions to help these

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to prevent obesity, maybe it would be helpful that expert dietitians, once a month have a lesson in some schools from primary to high school, and why

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, preventing and limiting obesity is necessary and governments must help. In

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main point of view, and I explained why I strongly agree with it.