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Some people believe that cell phones should be for personal use only; others,  ​    however, feel cell phones should be used mostly for work.​    Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Unquestionably, every coin has two sides and so are the
people
. Society's
people
 are divided into two groups and
therefore
, mobile usage has become a topic of debate among
people
.
This
 essay will compare and contrast both of the opinions
along with
 my opinion which is in the favour of former view will discuss in a sensible conclusion. Initiating with the points supporting the first school of thought,
firstly
, mobile
phones
 penetrated human life
due to
 increased usage of technology.
People
 who supported
this
 say that mobile plays a vital role in communicating with loved ones across the globe. It
also
 becomes mandatory equipment to complete routine activities like bill payments, online shopping and many more.
For example
, a study conducted in Hong Kong reveals that there are more active mobile
phones
 than the population. in fact, mobile
phones
 should be used for personal purposes only and avoid all other purposes. On the contrasting side,
people
 who held another viewpoint say that mobile
phones
 become an integral part of the corporate workspace because of two-factor authentication and various other reasons. They believe one can use mobiles to complete their work by sending emails, providing approvals and attending meetings.
Moreover
, as technology evolves around mobile apps, the younger generation coming up with innovative ideas and creating sensations in the telecom industry.
To conclude
, I would like to say that, mobile phone usage should be reduced by limiting it to personal purposes.
However
, it will depend upon the mindsets of
people
 which view they are in favour of.
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