A friend from abroad is visiting your country next month. She is planning to stay with you, but you cannot accomodate her. Write a letter to her. Tell her the reasons. Aplogise Make alternative arrangements.

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Dear Arsh, Greetings! It has been a long time since I hear from you. I hope you are in the pink of your health. I was immensely grateful when I came to know that you are visiting India after 5 years and feel sad at the same time because I am unable to accommodate you at that time. Actually, I took part in an international business competition

last

month and have been topped with flying colours. Now, I have to attend a hands-on workshop which is going to be held in New York from April 1st to April 15th. I hope you will understand my situation and I am very sorry for

this

inconvenience. But you don't need to worry about your accommodation. I already manage everything for you. One of my friends, whom you met at my sister's wedding, is living in Delhi, nowadays. He is a trader and works from home. He can easily take off from his job to accompany you.

Moreover

, I will book a tour package for you from a travel agent, so you can enjoy all the visiting spots in Delhi

such

as Red fort. I want to request you if you can postpone your trip because I really wanna enjoy these moments with you. Hope to hear from you very soon,

then

we can discuss the next plan. Best regards, Dhillon

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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