You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Explain why you're interested in the tour. • Ask for information about dates and prices. • Express your concerns about your fitness level. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

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DEAR SIR OR MADAM, I AM WRITING
THIS
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TO EXPRESS MY INTEREST IN A WEEK-LONG TRIP TO THE MOUNTAINS. I AM VERY MUCH INTERESTED IN EXPLORING MOUNTAINS FROM THE BEGINNING AND I THINK
THIS
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IS THE RIGHT FOR THE SAME.
ADDITIONALLY
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, I AM HAVING HOLIDAYS FOR THE NEXT TWO MONTHS. I SAW YOUR ADVERTISEMENT BROCHURE BUT IT DOES NOT CONTAIN ALL THE DETAILS.
THEREFORE
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, I WOULD LIKE TO REQUEST YOU SEND ME THE DETAILED PLAN WITH DATES AND WHAT ARE PRICE PACKAGES AVAILABLE FOR THE TOUR. IT WOULD HELP ME TO MAKE MY DECISION AT THE EARLIEST AND
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IT WOULD GIVE ME ENOUGH TIME TO PREPARE. I HAVE NOT BEEN WORKING OUT LATELY AND I DOUBT THAT I MAY NOT HAVE ENOUGH ENERGY TO COMPLETE ALL THE TASKS ON THE TRIP. IT IS NOT THAT I CANNOT WALK BUT I CAN WALK UP TO LIMITED MILES IN A ROW THAN I NEED TO REST. I HOPE YOU WILL CONSIDER MY SITUATION. I LOOK FORWARD TO HEARING FROM YOU SOON. YOURS FAITHFULLY, KISHAN
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