The free movement of goods across national borders has long been a controversial issue. Some people argue that it is necessary for economic growth, while others claim that it damages local industries. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
One of the most debatable issues of the
last
century has been the extent to which international trade
benefits or harms national economies. Many arguments have been made for and against free trade
between nations. In this
essay, I will discuss both views and state my own position. Those who support the expansion of global free trade
claim that economies grow faster when they can specialise in just a few industries in which they have a strong advantage. As a result
, each region or country produces something of value to the world economy. For example
, East Asia manufactures electronic goods
, the Middle East exports energy, and the EU produces luxury items. Free trade
proponents claim that dependence on global trade
helps to strengthen international cooperation and prevent wars. Meanwhile, opponents of free trade
—sometimes called ‘protectionists’—claim that the unrestricted movement of goods
and services causes damage to local communities. This
is because jobs are lost when it becomes cheaper to import a product than to produce it domestically. They also
argue that the vast distances travelled by food, oil, and consumer goods
is
harming the environment and making our lives unsustainable. Protectionists are in favour of tighter controls on the movement of Change the verb form
are
goods
and services in order to protect jobs and livelihoods. In conclusion, while
there are convincing arguments on both sides of the debate, a return to protectionist policies would surely be a mistake. I believe that global trade
is inevitable and should not be restricted. It is no longer realistic for nations to source all of their energy, food, and manufactured goods
within their own borders.Submitted by rizkibagus23 on
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Task Response
You have provided a clear and comprehensive discussion of both views and have shared an opinion at the end of the essay. This addresses the task effectively.
Coherence and Cohesion
The essay displays a logical structure and the ideas are well-connected. The introduction and conclusion are clearly presented, providing a strong framework for the essay.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite