Recently, the retail company you work for has been losing customers to a competitor. The company is setting up a scheme to encourage customers to stay with the company. Your boss has asked you to write a letter to the customers on your database outlining this customer loyalty scheme. Write the letter to your customers: •describing the benefits for customers of the loyalty scheme • explaining what customers must do to join the scheme • giving details of a special promotion to launch the scheme • reminding customers of the quality of your goods.
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Dear Sir
My name is Vy. I'm
co-worker
from the BBC company. I'm writing to let you know that Correct article usage
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customer loyalty scheme will organize on 23, Mel street at
13, march, 2023.
I would like to tell you about some benefits Change preposition
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of
this
program. Firstly
, we have a new product line and send it to you for trial free. Besides
that, we have some special gifts for loyal customers
. Secondly
, we have a concert for grateful when you stay with us since the company stated
business.
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about
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the event
Firstly
, we need to introduce our company. Secondly
, we have music. Finnaly
, we will talk about a new product line.
The new product line will release market on the next month. We would like to bring Correct your spelling
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in
customers
and help customers
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I hope you can join Add an article
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i'm
looking forward to hearing from you. Please let me knowChange the capitalization
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apply
this
program as I attached file
below.
Thanks and regards
Vy NguyenCorrect article usage
the file
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite