Some people say that advertisement encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Other say that advertisement tells us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoints do you agvreee with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Nowadays the number of ads is increasing
what
helps us to buy something new and useful, but some people think that advertisements force us to buy things which we do not need in our daily life. I suggest that there is a lot of type of products and it consists of good items Correct pronoun usage
which
as well as
bad so we need check
Fix the infinitive
to check
quality
and after Add an article
the quality
buy
it. I think that brand new products can help us to improve our life and introduce new features.
Creating ads and videos with items is catching onChange the form of the verb
buying
,
because when people see them they begin to get interested in them and Remove the comma
apply
then
buy. For example
, when I saw something new on TV or in
social media I'm beginning Change preposition
on
interest
in Wrong verb form
interested
this
thing and then
try to buy it. It's good because we do not waste our time for search, we can do it online and our product can be delivered to Correct pronoun usage
our home
home
. Fix the agreement mistake
homes
Likewise
, we can use it for selling our own items and earning money in this
way. I think it's also
one of the reasons why we need ads and social media's
.
As regard advertisements which forced us to buy things which we do Change noun form
media
jot
need, it's one of the negative sides. Correct your spelling
not
For example
, when we bought something from it we can get upset because of quality or maybe it can be defective. The solution of
Change preposition
to
this
situation could be that person who starts to improve his product, firstly
should show and gain the trust of the buyer.
In conclusion, we can see that we divided the categories into two parts, it's
positive and negative sides. If we buy Correct your spelling
its
this
thing online and got it with bad
quality we can refund Add an article
the bad
this
item anyway, or if this
company said that they cannot do it they should change merchandise
.Add an article
the merchandise
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