Some people say that advertisement encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Other say that advertisement tells us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoints do you agvreee with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Nowadays the number of ads is increasing
what
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which
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helps us to buy something new and useful, but some people think that advertisements force us to buy things which we do not need in our daily life. I suggest that there is a lot of type of products and it consists of good items
as well as
bad so we need
check
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to check
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quality
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the quality
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and after
buy
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buying
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it. I think that brand new products can help us to improve our life and introduce new features. Creating ads and videos with items is catching on
,
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because when people see them they begin to get interested in them and
then
buy.
For example
, when I saw something new on TV or
in
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on
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social media I'm beginning
interest
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in
this
thing and
then
try to buy it. It's good because we do not waste our time for search, we can do it online and our product can be delivered to
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our home
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home
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homes
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.
Likewise
, we can use it for selling our own items and earning money in
this
way. I think it's
also
one of the reasons why we need ads and social
media's
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media
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. As regard advertisements which forced us to buy things which we do
jot
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not
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need, it's one of the negative sides.
For example
, when we bought something from it we can get upset because of quality or maybe it can be defective. The solution
of
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to
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this
situation could be that person who starts to improve his product,
firstly
should show and gain the trust of the buyer. In conclusion, we can see that we divided the categories into two parts,
it's
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its
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positive and negative sides. If we buy
this
thing online and got it with
bad
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the bad
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quality we can refund
this
item anyway, or if
this
company said that they cannot do it they should change
merchandise
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the merchandise
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuasive power
  • impulse buying
  • awareness
  • innovations
  • perceived needs
  • artificially generated
  • educational aspect
  • informed decisions
  • social media and influencer marketing
  • non-essential luxury items
  • competitive market
  • visibility
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