Some people say that advertisement encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Other say that advertisement tells us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoints do you agvreee with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Nowadays the number of ads is increasing

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helps us to buy something new and useful, but some people think that advertisements force us to buy things which we do not need in our daily life. I suggest that there is a lot of type of products and it consists of good items

as well as

bad so we need

check

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to check

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quality

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the quality

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and after

buy

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buying

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it. I think that brand new products can help us to improve our life and introduce new features. Creating ads and videos with items is catching on

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apply

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because when people see them they begin to get interested in them and

then

buy.

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, when I saw something new on TV or

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social media I'm beginning

interest

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this

thing and

then

try to buy it. It's good because we do not waste our time for search, we can do it online and our product can be delivered to

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our home

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home

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Likewise

, we can use it for selling our own items and earning money in

this

way. I think it's

also

one of the reasons why we need ads and social

media's

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media

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. As regard advertisements which forced us to buy things which we do

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need, it's one of the negative sides.

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, when we bought something from it we can get upset because of quality or maybe it can be defective. The solution

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this

situation could be that person who starts to improve his product,

firstly

should show and gain the trust of the buyer. In conclusion, we can see that we divided the categories into two parts,

it's

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its

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positive and negative sides. If we buy

this

thing online and got it with

bad

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the bad

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quality we can refund

this

item anyway, or if

this

company said that they cannot do it they should change

merchandise

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the merchandise

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0Word repetition
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15Grammar mistakes
 

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303 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Topic Vocabulary:

persuasive power
impulse buying
awareness
innovations
perceived needs
artificially generated
educational aspect
informed decisions
social media and influencer marketing
non-essential luxury items
competitive market
visibility

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