Some people say that advertisement encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Other say that advertisement tells us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoints do you agvreee with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Nowadays the number of ads is increasing

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helps us to buy something new and useful, but some people think that advertisements force us to buy things which we do not need in our daily life. I suggest that there is a lot of type of products and it consists of good items

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bad so we need

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to check

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quality

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the quality

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and after

buy

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it. I think that brand new products can help us to improve our life and introduce new features. Creating ads and videos with items is catching on

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apply

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because when people see them they begin to get interested in them and

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buy.

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, when I saw something new on TV or

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social media I'm beginning

interest

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this

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thing and

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try to buy it. It's good because we do not waste our time for search, we can do it online and our product can be delivered to

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our home

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home

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, we can use it for selling our own items and earning money in

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way. I think it's

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one of the reasons why we need ads and social

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. As regard advertisements which forced us to buy things which we do

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need, it's one of the negative sides.

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, when we bought something from it we can get upset because of quality or maybe it can be defective. The solution

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this

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situation could be that person who starts to improve his product,

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should show and gain the trust of the buyer. In conclusion, we can see that we divided the categories into two parts,

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its

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positive and negative sides. If we buy

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thing online and got it with

bad

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the bad

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quality we can refund

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item anyway, or if

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company said that they cannot do it they should change

merchandise

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the merchandise

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

303 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

persuasive power
impulse buying
awareness
innovations
perceived needs
artificially generated
educational aspect
informed decisions
social media and influencer marketing
non-essential luxury items
competitive market
visibility

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