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Some feel that movies and tv shows are a good way to study history despite their lack of historical accuracy at times.

#feel #movies #tv #study #history #lack #accuracy #times
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 to modern,
due to
 digital development, movies and television shows become
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 materials. It is a controversial topic to study the past despite their lack of historical accuracy at times. In my opinion, I think it is a great intention and motivation to study,
although
 movies and television shows are not fully accurate, inspiration and visuals matter to
students
.
Firstly
,
history
 is consistent stories. I believed that if
students
 learn visually and sensory, they will get much more motivation and impress their memories.
Hence
, it is a great way to stimulate student intention to study.
For instance
, back in the days, when I first studied
history
, It had learning barriers for all our classmates to fully understand the different centuries, historical people and historical backgrounds. Luckily, our teacher changed the teaching method ,not from books but videos,
as a
result
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 all my classmates had a great improvement in our understanding ,of
course
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 parents and
teachers
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 are always supported and Guide them the find the truth wisely.
Secondly
, I firmly think that movies and TV shows are one of the methods to intend student inspiration and insight into their interest in
history
, once they found out their interest , they will willing to seek accuracy from
history
 books and
furthermore
. In conclusion,
history
 is an amazing topic to learn about our past till nowadays changes. Via Films and television shows are just one of the options to let
students
 learn
history
.
Therefore
, I totally agreed that it would be a great method to inspire
students
' interest, extend their stimulation and willingness to seek accuracy and access a variety of knowledge wisely.
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