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Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can is better for their overall skills development and creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree?

#activity #child #skills #development #creativity
Spending
the
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time
together with
children
 by doing their
favorable
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activities
 is a more effective way to develop and improve their
overall
 skills and creativity compared to reading. In my opinion, doing enjoyable
activities
 with a child is
a
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key to
develop
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 their creativity and
overall
 skills. It is commonly believed that reading can contribute the most benefits to
children
’s development because many parents consider reading is the most important thing to raise their
children
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children's
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 knowledge, which can lead to the development of creativity and other skills. Nowadays, there are a variety of
activities
 and games, which can help
children
 to be more
skillful
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 and innovative by participating in and playing.
Moreover
,
children
 prefer playing and enjoying the
activities
 to reading, which is often thought
as
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 a boring thing to do.
However
, most parents are the kind of opposite, and they force their
youngsters
 to read more, but they usually don’t notice that can make
children
 away from books.
On the other hand
, reading books together before bedtime is a different story, and by that practice,
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youngsters
 can explore many new things from books without being afraid of reading.
Otherwise
, parents should join their
children
 in doing
activities
 and playing games. Countless brainstorming
activities
 and practical games are developing day by day, and most are
well functioned
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 to help
the
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youngsters
 learn new and different subjects easily, even though they don’t notice they are learning something. In conclusion, enjoying
together with
 the
youngsters
 in their fun
activities
 will be a strategic approach to their better brilliant future.
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