The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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informations
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sales
of fairtrade-labelled
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fair trade-labelled
coffe
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coffee
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in five different countries in 1999 and 2004.
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babas
According to
the first table,sales
of coffe
in Correct your spelling
coffee
UK
from 1.5 Correct article usage
the UK
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million
millions
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euros
in 1999 had considerably increased to 20 Fix the agreement mistake
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millions
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euros
in 2004.In contrast
,Denmark and Sweden during these times had a slightly rose from 1994 to 2004 with 0.2 millions
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million
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euros
.Switzerland and Belgium had a steady increased
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On the other hand
,sales
of bananas in Switzerland had a sharp climed
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claimed
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million
millions
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of
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euros
to 47 Fix the agreement mistake
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millions
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euros
respectively.Uk and Belgium meanwhile had a gradually grew during this
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sales
in Sweden and Denmark has
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a striking similarities
in their pattern,they had Correct the article-noun agreement
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a striking similarity
agradually
decline in Correct your spelling
gradually
a gradually
this
period by half from 1.8 to 1 millions
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million
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euros
and 2 to 0.9 Fix the agreement mistake
million
millions
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euros
respectively.Submitted by marzieh.kiani on
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