The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie
chart
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gives
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information about what Anthropology
graduates
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did after finishing their undergraduate course. The second table
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illustrates how much money they earn after 5 years of
work
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experiences
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experience
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Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the majority of Anthropology
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were employed full-time. When it comes to their salaries, over 50% of
graduates
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earn at least $75,000 regardless of their type of employment. Looking at the pie
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in more
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, after studying Anthropology
from
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university, 52% of
students
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got
permanent
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job. As for the
students
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who
work
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temporary jobs, they take up 20% including 5% of
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who pursue
master
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the master
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course
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courses
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, 12% of
graduates
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are not currently working.
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the table
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shows that 80%
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graduates
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of graduates
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who
work
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as freelance consultants make at least $75,000 after 5 years of
work
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.
While
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students
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work
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for
government
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the government
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sector
earns
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the most. 50% of them earn more than $100,000 in the same timeframe.
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, private company employees who earn between $50,000 and 74,999 take up 35%,
whearas
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whereas
10% of them make $49,999 maximum.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, graduates, work, students with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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