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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie
chart
 gives
the
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information about what Anthropology
graduates
 did after finishing their undergraduate course. The second table
chart
 illustrates how much money they earn after 5 years of
work
experiences
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experience
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.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 the majority of Anthropology
graduates
 were employed full-time. When it comes to their salaries, over 50% of
graduates
 earn at least $75,000 regardless of their type of employment. Looking at the pie
chart
 in more
details
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, after studying Anthropology
from
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at
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 university, 52% of
students
 got
permanent
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 job. As for the
students
 who
work
 temporary jobs, they take up 20% including 5% of
students
 who pursue
master
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the master
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course
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courses
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.
In addition
, 12% of
graduates
 are not currently working.
Next,
the table
chart
 shows that 80%
graduates
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of graduates
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 who
work
 as freelance consultants make at least $75,000 after 5 years of
work
.
While
students
work
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who work
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 for
government
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the government
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 sector
earns
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 the most. 50% of them earn more than $100,000 in the same timeframe.
Finally
, private company employees who earn between $50,000 and 74,999 take up 35%,
whearas
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whereas
 10% of them make $49,999 maximum.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, graduates, work, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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