The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.
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salmons
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life cycle during their life. As it is clear,the process has about 5 stages.
Stating
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from lay on on the reed or stone in upper rivers and finishing
at the first stage
to
lay
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eggs again.Adults salmon,first of all,lay
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an egg
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egg
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on reeds or small stones somewhere in
upper
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the upper
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river that has slow movement.
TheN
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Then
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, after approximately five or six months
babay
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baby
slmon
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salmon
are born. At
this
stage baby salmon that called Fry and
they
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lenght
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length
are
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about 3-8 cm long.
Second
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stage,Fry
travel
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travels
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to
lower
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the lower
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river with fast flowing for approximately
next
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4 years.
after
this
period they
have
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become young salmons
that
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named Smolt. During
this
period they are between 12 and 15 cm.Smolt
imigrate
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immigrates
to open sea for another
further
5 years.After 5 years they have become adult salmon and they travel to somewhere in the upper river to lay eggs on stones or reeds.
This
cycle will continue during
the
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all
salmons
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life.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Life cycle
  • Spawning
  • Freshwater
  • Juvenile
  • Fry
  • Adaptation
  • Migration
  • Smolt
  • Rivers
  • Ocean
  • Challenge
  • Growth
  • Return journey
  • Hatching ground
  • Perilous
  • Upstream
  • Obstacle
  • Ecological impact
  • Preservation
  • Disturbance
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