The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.

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life cycle during their life. As it is clear,the process has about 5 stages.

Stating

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from lay on on the reed or stone in upper rivers and finishing

at the first stage

lay

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eggs again.Adults salmon,first of all,lay

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an egg

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egg

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on reeds or small stones somewhere in

upper

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river that has slow movement.

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, after approximately five or six months

babay

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baby

slmon

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salmon

are born. At

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stage baby salmon that called Fry and

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lenght

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length

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about 3-8 cm long.

Second

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stage,Fry

travel

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lower

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river with fast flowing for approximately

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the next

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4 years.

after

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period they

have

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become young salmons

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named Smolt. During

this

period they are between 12 and 15 cm.Smolt

imigrate

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immigrates

to open sea for another

further

5 years.After 5 years they have become adult salmon and they travel to somewhere in the upper river to lay eggs on stones or reeds.

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cycle will continue during

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all

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life.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

163 words

6.50

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Life cycle
Spawning
Freshwater
Juvenile
Fry
Adaptation
Migration
Smolt
Rivers
Ocean
Challenge
Growth
Return journey
Hatching ground
Perilous
Upstream
Obstacle
Ecological impact
Preservation
Disturbance

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The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.

Although more and more people read the news on the Internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree.

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

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