Museums
are one of the most important
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of every
countriesChange to a singular noun
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to show their
culture
and ancient times.Meanwhile,some
museumFix the agreement mistake
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around the world
haveChange the verb form
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no permission fee.On contrary,some
museums
have
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feeFix the agreement mistake
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.I think there are some merits and demerits
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both of them.I am going to discuss both in
this
essay with some
examples.
On the one hand,some
museums
in many
countries
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for permission.The reason is that
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they need
money
to spend
forChange preposition
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rehabilitationCorrect article usage
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and reconstruction of the historical places or
museums
as well as
they should hire
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staff to keep the
museum
clean and provide the safety
of Change preposition
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the Correct article usage
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museum
.As we know,
museums
keep numerous
kindFix the agreement mistake
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of valuable objects
such
as photos,
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,
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or traditional clothes that they remained from our ancestors.They are worthy and valuable for each
culture
.
In addition
,in some cases when
people
do not pay
money
for entrance they
understand how the
museums
can be valuable.
For example
,around the
there are many
people
who enter free
museums
and because of
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staffChange preposition
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or
they harm or scratch valuable
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.
On the other hand
,every
countriesFix the agreement mistake
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or city can gain benefits when they offer facilities to their tourist.
Firstly
,every part of the world has its own
culture
and custom.Every society
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some parts of its
culture
in
theirCorrect pronoun usage
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museum
.If their
museum
areChange the verb form
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free they can encourage
touristFix the agreement mistake
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to come to their
countries
and being familiar with their
culture
and in
this
way tourists spend
money
on
differentAdd an article
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sectorFix the agreement mistake
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in host
countries
instead
of
museums
.
Furthermore
,many poor
people
who Correct pronoun usage
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are interested to see
museums
but they
have much
money
to spend on
museums
or historical places.When
museums
are free all
people
inChange preposition
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different
money
levelFix the agreement mistake
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can experience
enjoyableAdd an article
an enjoyable
the enjoyable
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timeFix the agreement mistake
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when they see
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museum
.
To sum up
,the best way to save
museums
healthy and safe we
needAdd the particle
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spend
money
on them,the best way to survive them is
chargingChange the verb form
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small and moderate
money
from visitors to let
people
enjoy seeing
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as well as
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them intact at the same time.