Nowadays,a growing number of people with health problem are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is now trendy to select medical treatments aside from

doctors

when people facing sickness,

such

as newly invented tablets or recommended by friends.

However

, I do believe

this

pose an overwhelming threat to individuals'

health

condition. Some elaborated reasons

as well as

my thoughts will be outlined in the essay. One primary reason is that these alternative cures are broadcasted everywhere, which

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lots of attention .Businesses seize the opportunity to advertise these products,inviting well-known people to advertise them, in order to convince their fans to purchase them .If these products are effective

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patients,the rate of diagnosing sickness won't be increasing.

Moreover

, the side effects are usually not listed in the advertisement,some potential effects are neglected,which will have jeopardized our

health

in the long term. Another reason for watching

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inevitable information, some patients may have been diagnosed with untreatable diseases,which

doctors

can't cure

due to

their past experiences. They choose to browse the internet to find help, which lacks

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scientific proof .

In addition

, these unproved treatments are often pricey, and ultimately , people end up

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and unsure

health

problem .

On the other hand

, those who maintain that folk remedies benefit them physically and mentally, bring their

health

condition back to normal stage .Some have been through uncountable therapy yet still didn't their condition . Others may claim that

doctors

only prescribe medicine which will devastate other organs , which made them lose confidence in consulting

doctors

. By way of conclusion ,it seems that trying alternative medicines and treatments

instead

of visiting their usual doctor is a double-edged sword.

Nevertheless

, I am well convinced that the negative effects of other finding methods by ourselves overweighs the positive,since believing the experience from

doctors

is the policy.