You work in an office and have recently been experiencing a health problem. You think that the problem started because of the working conditions in the office. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: •describe the health problem •explain why you think it was caused by conditions in the office •suggest what the manager should do to improve the working conditions in the office

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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to inform you that I have caught a severe cold and fever, and suffering for the

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two days. The doctor has advised me to take rest for the next two days,

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which, I may not be able to come to the office for the next few days. I saw many colleagues coming to an office even if they are suffering from severe infections.

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, they do not wear masks and do not follow guidelines decided by our company to keep everyone safe.

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, confined office space makes it more uncomfortable.

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, I suggest you ask employees to follow the guidelines defined and wear masks all the time.

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to that, you may only allow people to enter who are healthy and encourage other workers to work from home if they observe any symptoms of cold or fever. I hope you will consider my suggestion. Yours faithfully, Kishan

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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159 words

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