The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram shows the process of creating
bricks
for the manufacturing industry.
Overall
,
it is clear that
in all stages
product
goes through a wide range of processes.At first manual work is used to pick all the clay and transform it into
bricks
.After ,that they go through high-temperature conditions.In the
last
,stage they are packed and ready to be delivered.
Firstly
,the special machine, which is called a digger, picks clay from the ground.
The next step is
to get rid of all useless pieces.The clay is sieved through the metal grid.The roller transports it to the following stage where the road of future
bricks
is split.By using sand and liquid machines create a wire cutter,which is half of the future
product
.Another part of the brick is
also
made from
this
material and is called mould.After the manual making , the process
product
is connected and forms a whole brick.
Secondly
,after ,all machine processes
bricks
must get rid of unnecessary water.A drying oven provides it.The future
product
spends there one or two days.After ,that it is moved to the kiln where the high-temperature
bricks
are hit.
However
,after giant temperatures
product
has to be cooled again in the cooling chamber,where it spends about two or three days.The
last
step is packing the ready
product
,after which it is delivered to public institutions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacture
  • brick(s)
  • building industry
  • digging
  • extraction
  • raw material
  • clay
  • mixing
  • moulding
  • wire cutting
  • drying oven
  • firing
  • kiln
  • high temperatures
  • hardening
  • cooling
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • traditional
  • modern
  • environmental considerations
  • sustainability practices
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