On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have a travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: 1)describe the lost item. 2)Explain how you lost it 3)Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing
this
letter to you
due to
last
weekend
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holiday I have
the
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bad luck to lost my
celphone
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cellphone
cell phone
,
in
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other hand
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, I am a person who always
have
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insurance for everything that I have. I know people lost their phones every day, and
this
time was me. My
Iphone
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iPhone
is
the
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model 13, and I use
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with
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a black case
for
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protect him if falling on the floor, I bought him in my born
tow
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, Orlando FL, at the Apple Store, and I
alredy
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already
block the
celphone
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cellphone
for nobody
have
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access to him. I just notice
when
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I lost him when a few hours late when we arrived at my
famili's
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family's
families
home. We went out
for
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enjoy the
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parade in
they
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town, I remember that we take some photos before
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start
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and normally I
aways
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put my phone in my back pocket, but
this
time something happened and I lost him. I
woud
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would
love
if
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you can run fast
for
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resolve
this
for me, I know that my insurance
cover
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everything and I do not have
concern
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about
this
, but I know
this
take some time for
I
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get
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the a
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check with the amount for a buy a new one. In conclusion, I will be very happy if you help me
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with
this
. Yours Faithfully Geandre C.
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