On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have a travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: 1)describe the lost item. 2)Explain how you lost it 3)Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing

this

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letter to you

due to

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last

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weekend

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holiday I have

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bad luck to lost my

celphone

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cellphone

cell phone

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other hand

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, I am a person who always

have

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insurance for everything that I have. I know people lost their phones every day, and

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time was me. My

Iphone

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iPhone

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model 13, and I use

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with

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a black case

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protect him if falling on the floor, I bought him in my born

tow

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, Orlando FL, at the Apple Store, and I

alredy

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already

block the

celphone

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cellphone

for nobody

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access to him. I just notice

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I lost him when a few hours late when we arrived at my

famili's

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family's

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home. We went out

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enjoy the

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town, I remember that we take some photos before

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aways

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put my phone in my back pocket, but

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time something happened and I lost him. I

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you can run fast

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resolve

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for me, I know that my insurance

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everything and I do not have

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check with the amount for a buy a new one. In conclusion, I will be very happy if you help me

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. Yours Faithfully Geandre C.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

227 words

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