The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarize this information by selecting and reporting the main feautures and make comparison where relevant.

The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

Summarize this information by selecting and reporting the main feautures and make comparison where relevant.
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The line graph and table illustrate the average
temperature
in a month and the annual numbers of sunshine in
London
, New
York
, and
Sydney
.
Overall
, the
temperature
of New
York
City and
London
are similar decreasing in the winter months and increasing in the summer,
while
the
Sydney
temperature
declined in the summer.
According to
the table, New
York
has the most sunshine
days
. The
temperature
in New
York
and
London
started at around 4 degrees and 8 degrees respectively with a slow rising until reaching around a quarter in July.
Then
these figures fell gradually to the start point in December.
In contrast
,
Sydney
days
are significantly warmer in January and
then
decline to 15 degrees in July. After that, the average
temperature
rises to hit a quarter in December. New
York
has the biggest numbers for shining
days
accounting for 2535 hours per year and
Sydney
has 2473 shiny hours. In comparison,
London
has the least sunshine
days
making up only 1180 hours.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words temperature, london, york, sydney, days with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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