You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In
this
period of globalisation, solar
energy
is becoming more popular in many nations rather than it was a decade ago. From my personal point of view,
this
source
of
energy
is less carbon emission
comparing
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to fuels, charcoal and more.
This
essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of solar
power
. In regard to the benefit of
this
energy
, using solar
power
contribute to less carbon emission. Solar
power
is
environmental
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environmentally
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friendly
energy
as it reduces the damage
on
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to
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ecosystem
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the ecosystem
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.
For example
, mining and drilling activities for fossil fuel are harming the soil and can cause flood
disaster
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if there is no action taken by
the
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apply
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society.
Moreover
, solar
energy
is a renewable
source
of
power
as
sun
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the sun
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is their only
contributions
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contribution
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.
Thus
, solar
power
are
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more reliable in saving the ecosystem as a whole.
On the other hand
, the disadvantage of solar
power
is it depends on
weather
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the weather
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. Since solar
energy
is generated by the sun, it seems impossible to achieve its
effeciency
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efficiency
during
raining
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or winter seasons .
For instance
, most of the countries in Europe with four seasons throughout the year find it difficult to use solar
energy
compared to Middle East
country
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countries
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such
as
saudi
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Saudi
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Arabia, Qatar and Egypt that
able
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are able
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to enjoy
this
development.
Thus
, solar
power
is not sustain
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is not sustained
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due to
environmental limitations. In conclusion, solar
energy
reduces carbon
emission
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emissions
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and has a sustainable period
compare
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to
other
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another source
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source
of
energy
.
However
,
this
power
has its own limitation as it weather-depend
source
of
power
and
only
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suitable to be used in a certain country.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Renewable energy
  • Sustainable
  • Carbon footprint
  • Green technology
  • Inexhaustible resource
  • Renewability
  • Photovoltaic cells
  • Off-grid systems
  • Investment
  • Subsidies
  • Tax credits
  • Installation expenses
  • Maintenance costs
  • Grid parity
  • Life cycle analysis
  • Renovation
  • Building-integrated photovoltaics
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