You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
In
this
period of globalisation, solar energy
is becoming more popular in many nations rather than it was a decade ago. From my personal point of view, this
source
of energy
is less carbon emission comparing
to fuels, charcoal and more. Wrong verb form
compared
This
essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of solar power
.
In regard to the benefit of this
energy
, using solar power
contribute to less carbon emission. Solar power
is environmental
friendly Change the adjective
environmentally
energy
as it reduces the damage on
Change preposition
to
ecosystem
. Add an article
the ecosystem
For example
, mining and drilling activities for fossil fuel are harming the soil and can cause flood disaster
if there is no action taken by Fix the agreement mistake
disasters
the
society. Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
, solar energy
is a renewable source
of power
as sun
is their only Add an article
the sun
contributions
. Fix the agreement mistake
contribution
Thus
, solar power
are
more reliable in saving the ecosystem as a whole.
Change the verb form
is
On the other hand
, the disadvantage of solar power
is it depends on weather
. Since solar Add an article
the weather
energy
is generated by the sun, it seems impossible to achieve its effeciency
during Correct your spelling
efficiency
raining
or winter seasons . Replace the word
rainy
For instance
, most of the countries in Europe with four seasons throughout the year find it difficult to use solar energy
compared to Middle East country
Change the noun form
countries
such
as saudi
Arabia, Qatar and Egypt that Change the capitalization
Saudi
able
to enjoy Add a missing verb
are able
this
development. Thus
, solar power
is not sustain
Change the verb form
is not sustained
due to
environmental limitations.
In conclusion, solar energy
reduces carbon emission
and has a sustainable period Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
compare
to Wrong verb form
compared
other
Change the wording
another source
other sources
source
of energy
. However
, this
power
has its own limitation as it weather-depend source
of power
and only
suitable to be used in a certain country.Add a missing verb
is only
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