The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph shows data on temperatures on monthly basis in 3 different cities with a table of annual hours of sunshine. The Y-axis shows different temperatures, and the X-axis shows 12 months, starting from January until December.
To begin
with, an
overall
analysis of the graphs illustrates interesting observations. Which are, both London and New York started the year with an average low temperature, 8 and 5 degrees respectively, and both increased steadily from the middle of February to reach their highest number in the middle of July, 29 for New York and 28 for London. Afterwards, they both declined constantly to reach below 10 degrees.
In contrast
, Sydney had a relatively high average temperature of 26 in the first month and ended the year with almost the same average temperature of 25 degrees.
Therefore
, an evaluation of
this
data provides evidence that geographical areas have different temperatures around the year.
In addition
, looking at annual hours of sunshine, London has the lowest number with 1,180 hours. The highest is New York with 2,535,
then
comes Sydney with 2,473
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