The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The table explains a comparison of
London
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and
Sydney
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temperatures at sunrise and sunset time
as well as
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the sunlight duration on 28-29 December 2018.
Overall
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, the average temperature in
Sydney
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was higher than in
London
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. Syndey
also
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had a long sun exposure duration than
London
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.
While
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London
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's trend is more volatile,
Sydney
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's weather tends to be stable at high
degrees
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. Ranging from 3
degrees
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up to 13
degrees
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Celsius
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,
London
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was more chilled compared to
Sydney
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. The sun only lasts for about 8 hours, starting from 8 am dawn time until 16 pm. From the given period, the coldest one reached 3
degrees
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happened on Saturday, December 29th 2018 and the warmest one was only 13
degrees
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on the same day. Meanwhile,
Sydney
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was evenly hotter than
London
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evenly approximately 17
degrees
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to 31
degrees
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celsius
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Celsius
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. The sun showed up around 6 am and
then
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appeared 14 hours later till dusk.
Furthermore
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,
Sydney
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experienced its hottest day on Sunday, 30th of December 2018, ranging from 19 to 31
degrees
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celsius
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Celsius
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words london, sydney, degrees, celsius with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • The tables compare
  • temperatures
  • hours of daylight
  • ranged from
  • consistently high
  • slight increase
  • remained stable
  • significantly fewer
  • enjoyed
  • overall
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