Write about the following topic. An increasing number of people are choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why are more people choosing to have operation to change the way they look? Do you think this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In
this
contemporary world, cosmetic surgery
is a rising industry. Therefore
, there is no denying the fact that some people
choose cosmetic surgery
is arguable, while
others believe that have disadvantages. This
essay will point out the reasons for cosmetic surgery
and its adverse effects on the community.
To begin
with, nowadays people
spend a lot of money on plastic
surgery
. This
may be will affect in own economy or feel accepted in society, whereas
people
that have a congenital disorder should be getting cosmetic surgery
because they have many problems with their cases or they could be not faced society. For instance
, my friend had a congenital case with her nose when she was borns, so she had chosen to do plastic
surgery
. Moreover
, she felt better and could breathe very well.
In addition
, other people
also
do plastic
surgery
because always they seek to be perfectionism or to be like face models. This
may be due to
their desire to fit into current beauty standards. For example
, in an article, a woman got plastic
surgery
on her nose just to be like Mahlagha jaberi's nose her surgery
had filled with many effects on the breathing process, skin cancer, Psychiatric illness, and not being confident to face society.
In conclusion, after a careful analysis of both points of view, I believe that cosmetic surgery
had more adverse than positive, which will be affected teenagers because they always want to be like actresses. Therefore
, these new beauty standards become increase in the future.Submitted by manalmmj95 on
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