Social media websites have amused large user bases. Do the advantages of being a part of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
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advantages
and disadvantages of using these platforms.
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the advantages
firstly
, a lot of people have many opportunities to show themselves or their services and goods to others, for example
selling their arts
and painting without having any special galleries or showing their acts and abilities to become famous. In continue, for the second advantage, I can mention making hobbies for elder people, Fix the agreement mistake
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for instance
, grand parents
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Thirdly
, everyone can read news in
social media and be up-to-date about events around the world.
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On the other hand
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the disadvantages
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I can notice some reasons, as a shining example health problems are the biggest Add a comma
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crisises
that you can see in people who watch these websites. either physical or mental problems. Staying inactive makes everyone sick, Correct your spelling
crisis
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your life and gain nothing.
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