when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

In

this

modern era, the elderly tend to live with other old

people

in an elder care facility with nurses available to look after them.

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definitely need money to keep

services

running and most likely the source of

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comes from the

government

. Others suggest that the families of these elders are the ones who are responsible for the fees. There are valid opinions on both sides which I will explain below. First of all, most

people

believe that the

government

should provide good

facilities

for elders. The funding for these

services

is from the

retirement

fund

that had collected by the

government

when these elders still working at younger ages. The

retirement

fund

should be invested in safe instruments so that when the old workers have to retire, they can enjoy their life with the deposit money.

Furthermore

, the

retirement

treasury is not the only source of

services

, but

also

from the taxes collected by the

government

.

For instance

, the

government

should be able to calculate the budget for elder

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, which

also

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considered

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the citizen of the country.

Moreover

, the authority should pay for these

services

since it is mandatory for them to take care of their

people

. Older

people

have done a lot for the development of their country and the

government

should thank them for providing a good place to live. Imagine if these elderly had done various jobs for the country when they were young and they

also

had paid their taxes, but in the

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they are abandoned by the

government

when they are old. It is very cruel for the old

people

since they

also

have the right to a better life.

To conclude

, I believe

government

should provide

facilities

to

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old

people

where they can live properly and not worry about

such

accommodations. The

facilities

should be paid by the funds that have been invested from the

retirement

fund

so it would not cause any financial issues.