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In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is considered very important. Why might this be the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

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In some cultures, owning a
house
 is a prominent purpose for
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a large
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group
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 of folks and they prefer to purchase a
house
 rather than being
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a tenant
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tenant
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tenants
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. I see
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 as a logical decision and in
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 I will scrutinize various angles of
this
 concept. To commence with, if someone has enough
money
 to buy a
house
 it will be so beneficial to do that
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for example
 he will not pay extra
money
 to someone else as rent and he can save
this
money
 and use it for other purposes and
thats
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that's
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 the only benefit,
also
 by purchasing a
house
 he
invest
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 in some significant class of assets with the tiny amount of depreciation that can be sold and change to cash in a short time.
on the other hand
 in investment
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 the price of houses grow Every year in most countries and that makes buying a
house
 a smart choice.
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 people can adopt
this
 approach as a shield
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against
 inflation to save their capital.
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 those who probably do not have enough
money
 for owning a
house
 can get
the
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 loan from banks and pay
installments
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 rather than paying the
money
 as rent
and
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the bright side is that they will be
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the owner
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owner
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owners
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 of the
house
at the end
 of
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the installments
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installments
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 and they
wont
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 pay anymore. All in all my bias on
this
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 is obvious and I am one of the
proponent
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 of
this
 idea.
Also
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 the
endeavors
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 of some groups for being
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an owner
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owner
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owners
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 rather than paying rent is comprehensible and in a financial
sight
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 it can be known as the most general and feasible financial decision all around the world.
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