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The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030
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The given graph provides information about the
amount
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 of consumption and prediction of
energy
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 in the USA over the time period 5 decades, starting from 1980 till 2030.
Overall
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, all
energy
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sources
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 have experienced an upward trend,
whereas
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 fossil
sources
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 have more
amount
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 than renewable
sources
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.
Also
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, fossil
sources
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 dramatically
increase
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, and the petrol-oil sector uses mostly.
However
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, renewable
sources
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increase
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 bit by bit. When we look at the fossil
energy
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sources
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 consumption
amount
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 in detail, the
amount
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 of petrol was 35
quadrillion
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units
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 in 1980, and it
increase
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 sharply to reach about 42
quadrillion
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units
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 in 2020. It will peak
to
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at
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 approximately 50
quadrillion
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units
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 in 2030 by guesses. Coal and natural gas were 15
quadrillion
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units
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 and 20
quadrillion
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units
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 respectively in 1980. In 2013, both
energy
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sources
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amount
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 were the same
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that
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which
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 is about 22
quadrillion
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units
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. End of the given time period, the coal consumption rate will be more than the natural gas rate which is almost 30
quadrillion
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units
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 and 25
quadrillion
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units
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 respectively. When we look at renewable
sources
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 in detail. all
energy
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 use rates were the same which is less than 5
quadrillion
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units
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 in 1980. In 1995, the solar/wind number was more than hydropower.
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, in 2010, hydropower was the
least used
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energy
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 source and solar/wind
energy
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sources
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 were the second place. These
source's
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sources'
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 rates will not change by 2030 by guesses,
while
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 nuclear
sources
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increase
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 a bit and it will continue at the same rate
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that
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apply
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is more than 5
quadrillion
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units
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, that is".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, energy, sources, increase, quadrillion, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Energy consumption
  • Renewable resources
  • Non-renewable resources
  • Fossil fuels
  • Nuclear power
  • Hydroelectric power
  • Solar energy
  • Wind energy
  • Biomass
  • Consumption patterns
  • Technological advancements
  • Energy efficiency
  • Sustainable development
  • Carbon footprint
  • Energy policy
  • Projections
  • Decade
  • Significant shifts
  • Economic factors
  • Environmental impact
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