The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030
The given graph provides information about the
amount
of consumption and prediction of energy
in the USA over the time period 5 decades, starting from 1980 till 2030.
Overall
, all energy
sources
have experienced an upward trend, whereas
fossil sources
have more amount
than renewable sources
. Also
, fossil sources
dramatically increase
, and the petrol-oil sector uses mostly. However
, renewable sources
increase
bit by bit.
When we look at the fossil energy
sources
consumption amount
in detail, the amount
of petrol was 35 quadrillion
units
in 1980, and it increase
sharply to reach about 42 quadrillion
units
in 2020. It will peak to
approximately 50 Change preposition
at
quadrillion
units
in 2030 by guesses. Coal and natural gas were 15 quadrillion
units
and 20 quadrillion
units
respectively in 1980. In 2013, both energy
sources
amount
were the same that
is about 22 Correct pronoun usage
which
quadrillion
units
. End of the given time period, the coal consumption rate will be more than the natural gas rate which is almost 30 quadrillion
units
and 25 quadrillion
units
respectively.
When we look at renewable sources
in detail. all energy
use rates were the same which is less than 5 quadrillion
units
in 1980. In 1995, the solar/wind number was more than hydropower.However
, in 2010, hydropower was the least used
Add a hyphen
least-used
energy
source and solar/wind energy
sources
were the second place. These source's
rates will not change by 2030 by guesses, Fix the agreement mistake
sources'
while
nuclear sources
increase
a bit and it will continue at the same rate that
is more than 5 Correct pronoun usage
apply
quadrillion
units
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