The charts below show US spending patterns between 1966 and 1996. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The pie charts demonstrate the American people's way of utilizing
money
from 1966 to 1996.
As illustrated by the 1966 graphic, the highest money
was spent on foodstuffs 44%. It was followed by cars with a difference of 21%. Spending on fuel was 9%. Restaurants and books had expenditures of 7% and 6% respectively. People used one-tenth of their money
on furniture, whereas
a mere 1% of the usage was observed for computers.
Turning towards the year 1996, expenditure on food was
decreased significantly to 14%, Unnecessary verb
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while
spending was
increased considerably on cars to 45%. The percentage of restaurant expenditure doubles after three decades. Unnecessary verb
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Money
laid out on petrol remained almost intact. A minor 2% downfall was observed in furniture spending. Computers money
utilization increased ten times than previous year. However
, books showed a reverse trend as they declined to 1%.
Overall
, people's money
layout preference increased substantially for cars along with
restaurants. Conversely
, spending on food dropped highly.Submitted by sukhie626 on
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