The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.

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The given pie charts show and compare

water

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consumption for three different purposes in San Diego, California and the world as a whole.

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, we can see that

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was used most for households in San Diego and California,

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the agricultural segment has the biggest percentage of global use. San Diego County residents use most of their

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for housing needs, at around 60%, which is followed by industrial demand for about 23% of the total. The remaining percentage is used for agricultural purposes at exactly 17%.

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figure ranks first among other proportions of worldwide use, at 69%. Regarding global

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consumption, its

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for domestic needs accounted for only 8% reaching the lowest number among other fields which is only one-sixth of the entire world's industrial

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. California is the only region which has slightly the same percentages in each field. Residential

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comes first with 39%, followed by industrial needs with 33%, and ending with its agriculture

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usage

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which accounted for just under 30%.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

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The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.

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