The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.

The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California

and the rest of the world.
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The given pie charts show and compare
water
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consumption for three different purposes in San Diego, California and the world as a whole.
Overall
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, we can see that
water
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was used most for households in San Diego and California,
whereas
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the agricultural segment has the biggest percentage of global use. San Diego County residents use most of their
water
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usage
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for housing needs, at around 60%, which is followed by industrial demand for about 23% of the total. The remaining percentage is used for agricultural purposes at exactly 17%.
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,
this
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figure ranks first among other proportions of worldwide use, at 69%. Regarding global
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consumption, its
usage
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for domestic needs accounted for only 8% reaching the lowest number among other fields which is only one-sixth of the entire world's industrial
usage
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. California is the only region which has slightly the same percentages in each field. Residential
usage
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comes first with 39%, followed by industrial needs with 33%, and ending with its agriculture
water
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usage
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which accounted for just under 30%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, usage with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • households
  • significant
  • industrial use
  • implications
  • agriculture
  • geographical
  • climatic
  • economic factors
  • patterns
  • sustainability
  • practices
  • surprising
  • exceptionally
  • improvements
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