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Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice.

#friend #drive #advice
Dear Kumar, I hope
this
 letter finds you in good health. First of all , Thank you so much for contacting me regarding your driving license.Here I will share with you some important tips and details for it. Here plenty of driving centres are available to teach and a lot of courses it has conducting.
Also
 When you want to choose a bike licence
that is
Class
 2B and it will vary depending on the motor engine CC .
Although
 If you want to go for the car they will provide manual and automatic both
class
 3 and
class
 3A.A heavy vehicle is
class
 4.
However
 , My suggestion is better for you to take
class
 3 . You must find your nearest driving centre for enrollment. Driving is not easier it needs more attention and confidence. If you have any doubts do not hesitate to me. Congrats on your driving courses. Safe drive . Warm wishes, Selva
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