You are preparing an event in the countryside. Write a letter to your friend and ask for help with the arrangements. What the event is. Why the event is being held? What arrangements have already been made? How your friend can help?

#event #countryside #friend #arrangements

Dear John, Hope

this

letter finds you in the best of health and spirit. I am writing

this

letter to inform you about the recreational event which I am planning to organize in a rural area. Here I would like to discuss my views with you.

Firstly

, I am planning to hold the recreational program in the rural area on 13 April 2023. Because I belong to the Punjabi culture and people celebrate that day with the happiness of harvesting crops. That's why 13 April is special for me and I am celebrating it.

Furthermore

, I have done all preparations except decorating the stage.

Besides

this

, I am confused about the distribution of gifts to children who are participating in dance and singing

as well as

drawing activities. All in all, I need your help because you have a vast knowledge of decorations. So the event stage is decorated with lighting and stunning flowers. In the end, we spend quality time together during the preparation of the program and enjoy ourselves. Looking forward to your positive response. Warm wishes, Eva.

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