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Some say that university students should pay the full cost of their studies because higher education only benefits the students and not the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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These days more and more, universities are offering scholarships and funds for
students
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 to be able to enrol in the programs
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 of letting the
students
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 cover all the tuition fees.
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, some people believe that it is not useful for the community.
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 essay will support my opinion that it is more beneficial to fund the
students
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 for their studies.
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 notion will be examined through an analysis of time and money. Regarding time, the student who going to have higher education is considered as an investment of themselves for society to learn and investigate new things. Specifically, they are spending years doing research on a specific topic and trying new techniques to help the world to solve it. An example of
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 can be seen in postgraduate
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 finding a new solution for global warming,
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, they will spend time working on it. In terms of money, there are many
students
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 who want to continue
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 studies but unfortunately, they cannot afford the tuition fees that’s why universities are providing to pay for their fees.
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, the fresh graduate
students
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 did not start their careers and did not earn money yet. One particular instance of
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 comes from the
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 who are not working, and do not have a second source of funds. In conclusion, universities providing scholarships for
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 is considered a great opportunity for many
students
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 to discover more solutions for the world, to be able to help society with it, and to that will inspire the next generation to continue.
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