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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Some
people
 believe
music
 plays a significant role in gathering others from various
cultures
 and age groups at a table. Personality, I have the same opinion and, I will explain why in
this
 essay.
Firstly
, the melody of any song can be pleasant despite the singing. To extend, it happened that some songs become very popular in different
countries
 or even at the global level just because of their melody despite
people
 enjoying them without knowing the language of their songs.
For instance
, K-POP singers are very famous and performed in different
countries
 in Europe and America. They
also
 have numerous followers on social media.
Secondly
, classical
music
 is the result of a social agreement that has admirers from diverse ages and backgrounds. In 18 and 19 centuries, it influenced art and enriched
cultures
, even though it was special for nobles and the royal family. Its results can be seen in Chopin's orchestra and Beethoven's symphonies which revolted Europe
music
.
Finally
,
people
 from different
cultures
 may like how a singer sings, not other attributes of the singer.
For example
, Justin Baber attracted many
people
 from many
countries
while
 he was a teenager. It might say that there are some contrasts with
this
 argument, which most notably is arguing among persuaders of different kinds of songs like classic and rap.
However
, it seems that
music
 makes societies more exclusive and
this
 is overweighted by its issues.
Overall
,
music
 is a key player to make a common value among diverse
cultures
, age groups, and
countries
. It doesn’t mean that it would be always peaceful, but it appears to be the case very frequently.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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