In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?
Over the concurrent years, the number of unemployed individuals with more than adequate qualifications has increased. There are many contributors to
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For example
, research conducted by the University of Toronto in 2015 noted that people with post-graduate business and economy-related degrees had difficulty finding a position with satisfactory offers, more than 37% in comparison to other degree holders.
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