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Millons of people every year move to English speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international language? Give reason for your answer.

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In the current world, there are numerous speaking languages, and some of them are really important
such
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 as
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, German, Chinese etc. Nowadays,
people
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 prefer places where is
speaking
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English
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 mainly because the global world's language is
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, and
people
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 who can speak
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 can work everywhere efficiently.
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 essay will give reasons for
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 circumstance. First of all, numerous major companies have generally been created in
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-speaking
countries
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.
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, APPLE or MİCROSOFT are in America, and many
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 want to work for these companies since companies give good salaries and
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a better
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 life.
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, knowing
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 change
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's lives, and
people
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 want to move to these
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.
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, individuals like to travel, and if
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 want to visit places easily, they should know
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 because it is easy to speak, and more than 60% of
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 can speak
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 worldwide.
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, if
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 have issues
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while
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with
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 transportation or the holiday, they can solve their problems as quickly as possible.
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, I went to America
last
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 year. During transportation, one man sat in my seat, and I solved my problem thanks to speaking
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. In
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 way,
people
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 should know
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 and the best way to learn it that move to
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 where
people
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's local language is
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.
To sum up
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, everything that has been stated so far,
people
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's choice have been changed to live a better life, so they prefer to move to
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these
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apply
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places because these
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 have robust economy and knowing
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 help to understand each other.
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task response
The essay addresses the topic but lacks depth and development. It provides relevant examples but needs to further elaborate on the reasons and the impact of studying in English-speaking countries.
coherence cohesion
The essay has a clear introduction and conclusion. The main points are supported with examples, but the overall structure needs improvement for better coherence and flow of ideas.
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