Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, think that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In

this

day and age, one part of our society opines that severe penalties for bad

road

behaviour are an efficient way to prevent drivers from unfavourable incidents. Meanwhile, some individuals consider that alternative actions can be undertaken to avoid potential hazards. From my point of view, both approaches can be taken for

traffic

safety. By combining them we can decrease the level of car crashes with measures of fine increase and infrastructure of routes

as well as

education of future drivers. On the one hand, rash driving contributes significantly to

road

accidents, so breaking

traffic

rules

should be penalized with fines or a driving ban . If a chauffeur has exceeded the speed limit or was seen by drunk-driving, they should be given a financial penalty and if they continue to disrupt

rules

, it leads to deprivation of license.

For example

, in South Korea, any

road

violation is punished by a considerable amount of fee.

As a result

, Korean citizens tend to break

road

rules

less because of fear of being sanctioned.

In addition

,

road

travel is tightly tracked so that people cannot go unpunished.

On the other hand

, despite strict penalization, there can be

traffic

conditions in order to escape dangers on the routes.

Firstly

, the government should expand the number of CCTV and vehicle speed controls on the roads in order to control speed.

Moreover

, the infrastructure of roads themselves should be changed and

risen

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in number to avoid

traffic

jams. Eventually, there can be included

traffic

education from the earliest ages.

For instance

, schoolers can learn

road

signs and regulations in order to reduce the chances of

traffic

fatalities.

To conclude

, the total number of fines should be grown to ensure citizens do not commit breaches.

Also

, children should gain knowledge about

traffic

to prevent themselves from negative implications. I personally believe that sanctions for driving offences and changes in

traffic

rules

can improve safety with help of authorities and good driver behaviour.