The pie chart shows the online sales for retail sectors in Canada in the year 2005 & 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The pie chart shows the online sales for retail sectors in Canada in the year 2005 & 2010.  Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The pie
chart
illustrates the percentage of online shopping in 2005 and 2010 for retail sectors in Canada.
Overall
,in the
first
,
chart
it is seen easily that the biggest part was "Clothing" which had 38%
while
other
sections
had close numbers.
On the other hand
, the
chart
for 2020 provides the information that the leader was the "Electronics" part with 45%,
while
the other 3
sections
had 55% split between them
Firstly
,the
first
chart
shows that
while
"Clothing" was in the leading place, the other
sections
didn't differ notably.The second section by per cent is "Home and Kitchen" with 29%,which is close to
first
place.
However
,the next section,which is "Electronic" had a number lower than the previous at 10%.
Last
but don't
last
Correct your spelling
least
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was "Groceries" with 14%.
Secondly
,after 5 years the
chart
remarkably changed.In
this
year "Electronics" became the total leader with 45%.The other 3
sections
were significantly lower than the
first
one.
Moreover
,two of them "Clothing"and "Groceries" had 22%.The outsider here was "Home and Kitchen" with only 11%
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