An American writer think that tomorrow is more important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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American author

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considers

tomorrow

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more important. I find his words reasonable, but I do not fully agree with

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. On

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hand, I can clearly understand what is the main idea of

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quote. Probably, It's about the fact that our future is more important than the present

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, we should always consider the consequences of our actions. Of course, no sane person would do something that dangerous to destroy

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's future. But I do agree that more people should dig deeper before doing anything, as

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's actions may have delayed

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momentary

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a creed is not so good for a living. Every day you wake up is today. If you

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delay your life thinking that tomorrow is always more important, there is a big chance that tomorrow will never happen.

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, we have nothing but

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. People who do not live in the

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and

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disturbed about what's in

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are more likely going to get depressed as they not really living their lives. So it's necessary to fully live every

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you got.

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, everyone should try to keep balance. Living in the

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will be

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senseless

if you never report

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the consequences of your actions.

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so much meaning in living for something you will never see. Because all we have is time for ourselves.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

240 words

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