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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled tea and pineapples in 2010 and 2015 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled tea and pineapples in 2010 and 2015 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables below compare
sales
 of fair-trade labelled
tea
 and
pineapples
 in 2010 and 2015 in several European countries which are:
France
,
Australia
, Germany, Netherlands and Norway. First of all, in 2010 Netherlands and
France
 had the same portion of
tea
 and pineapple
sales
, 2 million
of
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euros. But
pineapples
 in
Australia
 had the highest number, 16. Compared to
tea
sales
 in
Australia
 in 2010 it was 4. Moving on to 2015,
pineapples
 in
Australia
 were much higher than
2010
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.
Also
,
France
 in 2015 was
on
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 the top
on
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tea
sales
, but for
Norway
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 the lowest number was 2 in both
tea
 and
pineapples
.
While
Australia
 in 2015 was in second place in
tea
sales
, same as
France
it
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was 6.5. In conclusion, Norway in 2015 had the least amount of
sales
 for
tea
 and
pineapples
.
In addition
, the big change in number between the years 2010 and 2015 was in
Australia
, it went from 16 to 48.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sales figures
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • European countries
  • increase/decrease
  • growth/decline
  • trends
  • significant
  • noteworthy
  • highest/lowest sales
  • figures
  • comparisons
  • time frame
  • consistent growth
  • main trends
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