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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled tea and pineapples in 2010 and 2015 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled tea and pineapples in 2010 and 2015 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables below compare
sales
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 of fair-trade labelled
tea
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 and
pineapples
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 in 2010 and 2015 in several European countries which are:
France
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,
Australia
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, Germany, Netherlands and Norway. First of all, in 2010 Netherlands and
France
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 had the same portion of
tea
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 and pineapple
sales
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, 2 million
of
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euros. But
pineapples
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 in
Australia
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 had the highest number, 16. Compared to
tea
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sales
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 in
Australia
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 in 2010 it was 4. Moving on to 2015,
pineapples
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 in
Australia
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 were much higher than
2010
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.
Also
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,
France
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 in 2015 was
on
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at
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 the top
on
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of
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tea
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sales
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, but for
Norway
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,Norway
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 the lowest number was 2 in both
tea
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 and
pineapples
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.
While
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Australia
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 in 2015 was in second place in
tea
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sales
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, same as
France
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it
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was 6.5. In conclusion, Norway in 2015 had the least amount of
sales
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 for
tea
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 and
pineapples
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.
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, the big change in number between the years 2010 and 2015 was in
Australia
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, it went from 16 to 48.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, tea, pineapples, france, australia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sales figures
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • European countries
  • increase/decrease
  • growth/decline
  • trends
  • significant
  • noteworthy
  • highest/lowest sales
  • figures
  • comparisons
  • time frame
  • consistent growth
  • main trends
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