The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries
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The provided tables demonstrate data about the selling of labelled coffee and bananas of Fairtrade in five European lands in 1999 and 2004
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,the UK saw a big contrast in the coffee trade as the profit from its selling expanded enormously.Concerning bananas' income,Switzerland with a big initial revenue from the trade had a
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extension respectively. The original from Coffee in the UK made up only 1.5 mln euros,
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,over 5 years period,the number increased to 20 .Switzerland constituted only 3 with future growth to 6
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Denmark,Belgium and Sweden had not any rapid alterings in profit having compiled an average of 1.5 million in 2004. By 1999,the revenue from Bananas in Switzerland amounted to nearly 15 million euros
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tripled with an eventual gain of 47 mln .The UK and Belgium had a mutual 1 and 0.6 and by 2004 grew up fivefold.In the meantime,Sweden's and Denmark's banana trade figures halved,amounting to only 1 on average
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of the period.
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  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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