The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

The line graphs illustrate the

number

of foreigners and local academics that attended

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Australian

universities between 2001 to 2010.

Overall

, there was

a

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increase in both groups over the

years

.

However

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the enrolments of local

students

was

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higher

comparing

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to the overseas.

In addition

,

while

the commencing for non-locals

steadly

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steadily

increased, the locals saw a

minium

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flatuation

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fluctuation

fluctuations

during the 10

years

period. In ten 10

years

overseas

students

attending Australian universities

quadruaplated

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quadrupled

. The

inicial

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initial

number

in 2001, was about 20000 and

this

number

reached just above 80000 in 2010. The local

students

started

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40000 and rose to above 60000 between 2006 and 2007 when it reached

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plateau

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and continued without any

increased

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or decrease till 2010.

Whereas

the commencing for foreigners

students

steadly

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steadily

increase over the

years

, the local Australians

students

saw a minimal

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fluctuation

with a rise in 2002 to more than 20000

than

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then

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a decrease to below

this

number

and a rise again in 2008 and

subsequently

a decrease.