In some countries a large number of graduates are unemployed. What do you think is the cause of this and what measures could be taken to solve the problem?

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let us explore the reasons of a lot of

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are jobless. The first prime reason is that the

retirement

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is high.

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means that the employee cannot retire before completing the

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in Oman the

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age

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is 20 years of working. The second significant reason is that hiring

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foreigners

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more than

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local

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employees is more than local employees. Now, let us turn to the steps to solve

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reducing the

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age

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will give the chance to

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frish

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fresh

graduates

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to find a job easier. The second

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hiring

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local

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( Omanisation ). In conclusion, because a lot of

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are

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consequence of the

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age

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is high and hiring

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more than

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local

workers

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, the

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to the issue is reducing the

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age

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and hiring local

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of

foreigners

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