Many people think that the behavior of professional sportsmen off the field is not important as long as they are good players. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

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that professional

sportmen's

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no longer crucial as long as they play well in the field. From my personal point of view, I

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the statement mentioned above.

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is because

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an important role in shaping society's behaviour and might affect their career in the future.

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the given statement, I firmly believe that

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to

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society nowadays. Since they are

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due to

their excellent contribution

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sports,

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a bad

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attitude will highly

infuences

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.

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, some

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drug and tobacco products give a negative impact

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people as some of them might try to use the product even though they know

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illegal and dangerous to their health.

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, sportsmen or sportswomen should show an ethical manner to the public. Explaining some of

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another supporting points

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in

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against

this

statement is bad attitude has an impact on

sport

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players

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career

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as a whole.

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, if they continue to normalise

this

unethical behaviour, it will

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the interest of

sponsorship

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company and in

worst

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case might

getting

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banned from entering another competition in the future.

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, it is significant to gain

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perception

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others.

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, poor behaviour

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by professional

sport

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player cause harmful

effect

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on people's

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as well as

their future

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.

Therefore

,

although

they have a good experience in certain sports, showing a good manner to the public is

also

necessary.