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Some say that every human being can reate art other think only people born with the ability can reate art. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#say #reate #art #people #ability
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The phenomenon of
art
 can be created by
anyone
 or only the
people
 who have naturally special skills has aroused wide concern among various circles. Divergent as
people
's views on
this
 issue in question may be, I personally believe that any
people
 would create
art
. On
on
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one
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 hand, some folks think that only a few
people
 in the world
is
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truely
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truly
 able to create
art
, and
the
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others just
pretent
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pretend
 that they are making
art
 because creating
art
need
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needs
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 some special skills that cannot learn and use
them
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by
anyone
.
For example
, some
painting
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paintings
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 cannot copy by
other
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others
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 even
through
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though
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specialist
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specialists
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 analyze all the
colous
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colours
 and techniques
have
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that have
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 been
use
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 in those
drawing
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.
Hence
,
the
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true
art
 can only create by some
people
 who
born
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are born
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 with unique abilities.
On the other hand
, some argue that
any
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humans should be able to create
art
either
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 they have talent or not. To illustrate, any
things
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thing
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 that
made
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is made
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 by
anyone
 with their own abilities and
creative
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 should be defined as
a
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art
, but it is through the
agressments
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agreements
 by others.
Therefore
, I believe that as long as the object is created by yourself,
then
 those objects should be considered
as
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a
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art
. Under
this
 line of thinking, it seems to me that
art
 can be made by
anyone
 if it is original, and there
is
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are
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 no
any
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apply
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other external factors that can
effect
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affect
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 it.
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