Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.Mecky

Dear Mikey, I hope you and your family are doing well,
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am so sorry about the noise that make your family
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recently in our apartment. Recently, my sister from another province moved to my house with a lot of stuff which
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types of furniture
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and kitchen equipment. We were trying to move
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from the morning but it had too many things to organize. It will
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about 2 or 3 more days to finish everything and after
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we will bring you some special gifts from my sister as an
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. Regards, Your neighbour
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