The pie charts provide information about the proportion of three kind of nutrients included in common meals in the USA. These nutrients might be harmful when eaten pretty often.
The three pie charts provide data on the percentage of sodium, saturated fat and added
sugar
in usual American meals.
It is clear that
dinner includes the biggest amount of different additions. Approximately two-fifths of all consumed sodium and saturated fat are eaten during dinners (43% and 37% respectively). In addition
, lunches are pretty harmful. Lunch accounts for 29% and 26% of the total included
sodium and saturated fat. Wrong verb form
including
On the other hand
, snacks remain unhealthy due to
the high content of added sugar
. Approximately 42% of the total consumed added sugar
accounted for lunch.
Probing further
, breakfast is the healthier meal in the USA due to
the law proportion of nutrients included, all the nutrients account for a small minority (from 14 to 16 per cent).
Overall
, dinner is the most harmful meal during the day because of the high amount of different additions included. Moreover
, snacks are unhealthy due to
the high amount of added sugar
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